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Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Final Paper

                                              
                                    

                             Discrimination on women in the workplace
                                                                                           




                Around the world, women have been suborned to men in many sectors. Men occupied the first place in most everything as the main money-maker; make important decision due to the earnings men’s work is considered greater than wife’s work.  However, traditions and cultures play a huge role by impacting the way women are treated in society. For many women, this idea of thinking that it is a different place for women than men should be completely change to break the glass ceiling. As an example, what can be done to stop workplace discrimination did to women?


            Before the commercial world begin to expand, women worked as housework with some task such as responsibility for children and the home. For example Burundi, in my country, men is the important person of the family who is responsible of the family in rural areas; he is still seen as the only person who provides money for food, clothes and any needs which are undeniable for the survival of the family. When he is at work, the wife takes care of children and home by maintaining the family’s health well-being. With this lifestyle, the stereotype of women was founded on that, which means they are seen as household. Mostly, men were agree in some way women can have a career, as long as children are taken care, dinner is served and the house is clean and order.

            Across the world with the industrialization, women found their place as the first common job in the industries of clothes, shoes because they were reputed to do things with smoothness and young women were encouraged to work for those fields. Many women’s earning stay not equal to men’s earning reflected to this ideology that men is the only responsible of the family which explain women has been segregated with less wave than men. Mostly, the presence of poverty conducts to the divorce for many women. In that situation, women have to work many hours almost 17 hours per day, and they have children to take care. Sometimes, women get not enough waves but they still have to buy food or clothes for their children. Whereas, women work hard between life at home and life at work.

            Since working, women have difficulty to advance in their career caused by       men who want to manage any sectors in workplace. In many companies or in any workplace, the most common job for women is a receptionist, cashier for less waves than men. With this glass ceiling, women cannot make a progress in their career because there is an obstacle which is a barrier made by men to keep women in low post without any way to be a leadership. As result, women has been suborned in the workplace considered as they are weak for leading a group of people; for example make good decision.

            Days after days, women fight for their right in workplace, gender inequality and their right against discrimination by creating some associations or using education. Using education as a way to inform people, this system should be fundamental for preparing the future generation to avoid completely the subordination of women. What constitutes discrimination against women is not a point on which states readily agree.

           The Convention on the Elimination of All Forms of Discrimination Against Women (the Women Convention) develops the legal norm on nondiscrimination from a women's perspective. This Convention moves from a sex-neutral norm that requires equal treatment of men and women, usually measured by how men are treated, to recognize that the particular nature of discrimination against women merits a legal response. This Convention is thereby able to address the particular nature of women's disadvantages.

           One approach to clarifying what constitutes discrimination against women in international human rights law is though the development of General Comments or General Recommendations by the committees established  under the different human rights conventions. For example, the Human Rights Committee, established to monitor state compliance with the Political Covenant, has issued General Comment 18 on nondiscrimination based upon the " similarity and difference" model of discrimination. The General Comment states that "not every differentiation of treatment will constitute discrimination, if the criteria for such differentiation are reasonable and objective and if the aim is to achieve a purpose which is legitimate under the Covenant". For the purposes of the Women's Convention, a legal definition of "discrimination against women" was required. Discussion leading to the evolution of the Women's Declaration into the Women's Convention showed an intention to define discrimination against women for purposes of legal application and enforcement of the Convention.
According to Article 1,
  The term "discrimination against women" shall mean any distinction, exclusion or restriction made on the basis of sex which has the effect or purpose of impairing or nullifying the recognition, enjoyment or exercise by women, irrespective of their marital status, on a basis of equality of men and women, of human rights and fundamental freedoms in the political, economic, social, cultural, civil or any other field.    
 

            From sexuality issues to Age, the discrimination against women include different forms.The Age Discrimination in Employment Act of 1967, as amended, 29 U.S.C.A & 621 et seq., prohibits discrimination on the basis of age against 40 and 70 years. The act uses the enforcement provisions of the Fair Labor Standards Act, and covers: employers, who have 20 or more employees for 20 weeks in a year; labor unions having 25 members; and employment agencies. State and local governments were included in the term "employer'' by amendments in 1974. The application of the Fair Labor Standards Act to state and local governments was held invalid under the Commerce Clause. The EEOC (Equal Employment Opportunity Commission) is generally charged with the enforcement of the act. It investigates claims of age discrimination, attempts conciliation, and has the power to file civil actions. It should be remembered that an EEOC suit generally precludes private relief.

            Over years and years, even if these laws exist, women still have really big issues on struggling with their career. In fact, the impacts of balancing work and family, financial distress, using skills talents that aren't "natural" to them, also feeling chronically undervalued and disrespected. In addition, women had experienced little joy or positive meaning in their work although they are in a good position. This condition of discrimination in the workplace had certain effects which have been affecting in some way women in their work.

            Some of those discriminate can be submerged with a huge anger which will result to a loss of selfish and confidence. In some case, women who work in place that they have been physically violated; it will impact them emotionally, and their work will be not productive as well which can cause to the women to be fired. Most of women are destructed in that way which perturbs their confidence in the workplace.

            In Brief, so many associations and Women’s conference around the world had been created to find solutions to resolve the discrimination on women in the workplace. Therefore, women’s discrimination still exists but it has been changing years after years.
 



       


Work-Cited :
1. http://www.85broads.com/experts/kathy-caprino/top-5-reasons-for-womens-career-dissatisfaction-and-what-to-do-about-them
2. http://www.rainbo.org/discrimination-of-women-throughout-the-world/

3. Jack B. HOOD & Benjamin A. HARDY, Jr., " Worker's Compensation and Employee Protection Laws", West Publishing Compagny, October 1983
4. http://smallbusiness.chron.com/effects-gender-discrimination-workplace-2860.html
5. Rebecca J. Cook, "Human Rights of Women", Pennsylvania studies in human rights, 1994



 

Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Outline of my final paper


           " Discrimination on Women at workplace"

   
     Introduction
  
          Around the world, women have been suborned to men in many sectors. Men occupied the first place in most everything as the main money-maker; make important decision due to the earnings men’s work is considered greater than wife’s work.  However, traditions and cultures play a huge role by impacting the way women are treated in society. For many women, this idea of thinking that it is a different place for women than men should be completely change to break the glass ceiling. As an example, what can be done to stop workplace discrimination did to women?
     Body
  Background
      1. Women around the world
      2.Stereotype of Women
  Evolution of Women
      1.Worker's rights
      2.Women's career struggles
 
Conclusion

Tuesday, November 27, 2012

The topic of my Final paper



I chose to talk about "Discrimination on women (workplace).It took me time to find a really good interresting topic i want to do on my essay.From my point of view, discrimination on women at work is everywhere around the world.But for my essay, i will focus more on comparing how women are treated in workplace between where i am from and in the United States. 

Review interview 3


First interview: Chen, ZeYu ( http://nhriver.blogspot.com/ )-19points
           On this third interview, he did a great job with the country report and also his interview report was good;it will be better with an audio file.

Second interview:Ouedraogo, Jonathan T (  http://en191f12s28jonaou.blogspot.com/ )-19points
            By making solid with supporting details, his interview was good in each topic.


Third interview: Sengwiza, Loris ( http://en191f12s28lorissen.blogspot.com/ )-19points
            This interview has a high score too; it gives enough informations and covered every topic.It lost one point due to the lack of information in interview report.





Here is my scorecard

Review interview 2


First interview: Toure, Mohamed L ( http://en191fl12s28mohamedto.blogspot.com/ ) -20points
                     The presentation of his second interview is first attracting a person to read;well organise with title for each topic. It seems he was really prepared, and give us explicit enough informations.

Second interview: Galkina, Elena V ( http://elenaen191f12s28.blogspot.com/ ) -19points
                    She did a good job as well, and her interview report and country report was really well reported.

Third interview: Ouedraogo, Jonathan T (http://en191f12s28jonaou.blogspot.com/ ) -19points
                                     I really liked how his blog was structured,and the strengh of his information.


here is my scorecard

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Third interview




 
Most of you will ask you why did i choose to talk of my own country in this second interview; It is a such good opportunity for me to share more about where i am from.I take of this interview a chance of showing where is located my country, about our culture and religion.

Preparation

Preparation


First,i had to find the right person from my country who should be able to answer all my 12 questions i came up. I was more exicted than furious this time. I knew i will be interviewing someone i know well which will be a little bit funny.
Secondly when found my interviewee, i began to think where and what time we should meet and how i will process to begin my interview. I had also developped some objectives which i had to achieve after the interview.


How did you approach people

My interviewee is more informed about Burundi. I wanted to find someone who have enough knowledge about my country. For that, i sent an email with some more explanation about the interview to every Burudian asking who feel able to make it. After receiving a feedback from one of them, we scheduled what time and the place we will meet.


When,Where, and How did you Conduct the interview

The second interview was with Bill M. who is from Burundi the same city as mine. We met Saturday in library second floor at 2pm. I came earlier about 5 minutes before to be prepared for the interview. Library was the perfect place because it was comfortable for each of us to talk.

Whom did you interview?

I interviewed Bill M., he is burudian as well and his major is Finance.

Interview Report

Describe the interview

The interview went very well. As we were in the middle of the interview, we sometime make some jokes to relax and continue. It was a pretty good interview better than the first as i noticed it.My interviewee gave me enough informations about the questions i was asking him.Bill tried to use a vocabulary i can understand during the interview.I was not really surprised because much of things were accurate as i know.However, there is some answers i didn't have any idea;he pretty know a lot thing.

Country Report

Map of Burundi



Burundi also called "Heart of Africa" is a country in central of Africa, capital called Bujumbura, border by Democratic Republic of the Congo, Rwanda and Tanzania.Having a population of 10,557,259, Kirundi is the native language but French and Swahili is spoken too. About 67% of people are Christian and there are few muslim and indigenous beliefs.With an equatorial season, it is more sunny the whole year. Most of the people live of agriculture which is the main field helping the economy growing up including coffee, cotton, tea, corn, sorghum, sweet potatoes, bananas, cassava (manioc); beef, milk, hides. Fishing is also practised a lot in Lake Tanganyika which is the second largest freshwater lake in the world by volume(4,823feet) and the second deepest(1,470m) after Lake Baikal in Siberia.





Louis Rwagasore (1932 - 1961)

            "Assassinated on October 13th 1961 by his opponents with pro-Belgian Christian Democratic Party and people from the opposite party who didn't want immediate independance" hero of the nation Prince Louis Rwagasore with his party brought the country to the independance in July 1st 1962.After his assassination, the country had some tension between the two ethnic Tutsi and Hutu. However, there is another ethnic called Twa about 1% of the population.In october 21th 1993, "the first democratically elected president Melchior Ndadaye was assassinatted after some days passed in his office"; the country faced a civil war genocide till 2003 caused by ethnic violence between Hutu and Tutsi;It killed about 300 000 burudians.Many people were moved from their homes to neighbour countries. "The agreement of power-sharing between Tutsi-dominated government and the Hutu rebels in 2003 brought the country in peace.".

As traditional food, burudians prepare this food called "Cassava Dough" which is made with flour of manioc and water. Mostly cooked during celebration of a holiday, but also during normal day. Burundi's culture is more consisted on being polite, respectful and honest for a person who is old than you, not judging and moral stands. The culture is reflected by Drummers for men played during big ceremonies and traditional dance for women.






References:
Transcript:
Bill M.: Interviewee
Loris : Interviewer
L: Goodafternoon!How are you bill today?
B:I am fine!how about you
L:I am doing great too!Thx..Ready for the interview?
B:Yeah!
L:Ok!my first question will be Could you tell me about yourself?

B:My name is Bill M. and i am 22years old.I came in the United states 2years ago, and my major is Finance.
L:Why did you choose to study at St. cloud state university?
B:My friends who were here already told me about St. cloud state university, and i found that it was really cheap compare to other college.
L:What are you planning to do after school?
B:Well! you know most of the time when you are not done yet with school you don't know yet. I am thinking to go back but at the same time i think to make money first and then go back;so i didn't make a decision yet.
L:Can you tell me about activities young people like to do in your country?
B:In Burundi, young people like to spend time at the beach during the weekend with their family and go to church on Sunday. But usually, young people make events for helping poor people or homeless;and i think it is really good idea which became famous.
L:Would you like to tell me about your country?
B:Yeah!Burundi is a country located in East Africa;it is also called "Heart of Africa".We have drummers which is a men traditional dance, and The Lake Tanganyika where a lot of people go to hung out during weekend.
L:What is your traditional food?
B:Cassava Dough is our traditional food, it is made with flour of manioc only and water. We ate that with a sauce made with beans or meat of cons.
L:Could you tell me about your country's traditional process regarding marriage?
B:This is the most big event in our country because there is a lot money which is spent in that.I should say it is still traditional.The marriage is in three part which is "Dote" when the guy go to the girl's house with many presents for the family.The next day is "marriage" which begin with a mess and a reception after.Thrid day is "kutwikurura" which is mostly the two families gettin togethter to the new married's house.
L:What are your country's major religions?
B:The most important religion is Christian,but there is some musilm too.
L:Is there anything you would like to add before we end the interview?
B:Our country is building another future with tourism, and i think we will do great even if this civil war will be never forgotten.
L:Thank you for your participation
B:My pleasure! you welcome






Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Second interview Burundi



Most of you will ask you why did i choose to talk of my own country in this second interview; It is a such good opportunity for me to share more about where i am from.I take of this interview a chance of showing where is located my country, about our culture and religion.

   Preparation

                 Preparation


First,i had to find the right person from my country who should be able to answer all my 12 questions i came up. I was more exicted than furious this time. I knew i will be interviewing someone i know well which will be a little bit funny.
Secondly when found my interviewee, i began to think where and what time we should meet and how i will process to begin my interview. I had also developped some objectives which i had to achieve after the interview.


               How did you approach people

My interviewee is more informed about Burundi. I wanted to find someone who have enough knowledge about my country. For that, i sent an email with some more explanation about the interview to every Burudian asking who feel able to make it. After receiving a feedback from one of them, we scheduled what time and the place we will meet.


             When,Where, and How did you Conduct the interview

The second interview was with Mike N. who is from Burundi the same city as mine. We met Saturday in library second floor at 2pm. I came earlier about 5 minutes before to be prepared for the interview. Library was the perfect place because it was comfortable for each of us to talk.

            Whom did you interview?

 I interviewed Mike N., he is burudian as well and he will be graduated next semester.

    Interview Report

            Describe the interview

The interview went very well. As we were in the middle of the interview, we sometime make some jokes to relax and continue. It was a pretty good interview better than the first as i noticed it.My interviewee gave me enough informations about the questions i was asking him.Mike tried to use a vocabulary i can understand during the interview.I was not really surprised because much of things were accurate as i know.However, there is some answers i didn't have any idea;he pretty know a lot thing.

      Country Report

Map of Burundi



                   Burundi also called "Heart of Africa" is a country in central of Africa, capital called Bujumbura, border by Democratic Republic of the Congo, Rwanda and Tanzania.Having a population of 10,557,259, Kirundi is the native language but French and Swahili is spoken too. About 67% of people are Christian and there are few muslim and indigenous beliefs.With an equatorial season, it is more sunny the whole year. Most of the people live of agriculture which is the main field helping the economy growing up including coffee, cotton, tea, corn, sorghum, sweet potatoes, bananas, cassava (manioc); beef, milk, hides. Fishing is also practised a lot in Lake Tanganyika which is the second largest freshwater lake in the world by volume(4,823feet) and the second deepest(1,470m) after Lake Baikal in Siberia.





Louis Rwagasore (1932 - 1961)

           "Assassinated on October 13th 1961 by his opponents with pro-Belgian Christian Democratic Party and people from the opposite party who didn't want immediate independance" hero of the nation Prince Louis Rwagasore with his party brought the country to the independance in July 1st 1962.After his assassination, the country had some tension between the two ethnic Tutsi and Hutu. However, there is another ethnic called Twa about 1% of the population.In october 21th 1993, "the first democratically elected president Melchior Ndadaye was assassinatted after some days passed in his office"; the country faced a civil war genocide till 2003 caused by ethnic violence between Hutu and Tutsi;It killed about 300 000 burudians.Many people were moved from their homes to neighbour countries. "The agreement of power-sharing between Tutsi-dominated government and the Hutu rebels in 2003 brought the country in peace.".

As traditional food, burudians prepare this food called "Cassava Dough" which is made with flour of manioc and water. Mostly cooked during celebration of a holiday, but also during normal day. Burundi's culture is more consisted on being polite, respectful and honest for a person who is old than you, not judging and moral stands. The culture is reflected by Drummers for men played during big ceremonies and traditional dance for women.






References:
 
Transcript:
Mike N.: Interviewee 
Loris : Interviewer
L: Hey Mike!How are you doing?
M:Hi!fine fine..
L:Ready for the interview?
M:Yeah!
L:Ok!my first question will be Could you tell me about yourself?

M:My name is Mike N. and i am from Burundi as you know(laugh), and the same city as you Bujumbura.I am 25 years old, and i will be actually graduated next semester if nothing change.
L:Why did you choose to study at St. cloud state university?
M:I chose here because it is more cheaper with the scholarship too, and i had couple friends who were before when i came.
L:What are you planning to do after school?
M:Well! i did not decide yet if i should go back or work before and then go back.My parents want me to go back after school.But thinking about the experience i can get here;i don't know yet.
L:Can you tell me about activities young people like to do in your country?
M:Football is the most famous activity for young people in street or at the beach.During the weekend, they go to the club at night and beach for the afternoon.Most of them have small job.Sunday, everyone go to church.
L:Would you like to tell me about your country?
M:It is landlocked country.It is located in central of Africa, and it has a really good weather not really hot.We had a civil war which took about 10years due to ethnic between Tutsi and Hutu. People now try to construct what they lost during that war.
L:What is your traditional food?
M:it is called Cassava Dough, made with flour of manioc only and water. We make a sauce for it with beans;hmm..i really like it.I think we ate it every sunday at home.
L:Could you tell me about your country's traditional process regarding marriage?
M:I think it is the most big event in our country because there is a lot money which is spent in that.I should say it is still traditional.The marriage is in three part which is "Dote" when the guy go to the girl's house with many presents for the family.The next day is "marriage" which begin with a mess and a reception after.Thrid day is "kutwikurura" which is mostly the two families gettin togethter to the new married's house.
L:What are your country's major religions?
M:There is a lot Christian, and muslim people are present too.
L:Is there anything you would like to add before we end the interview?
M:You became a good interviewer(laugh)
L:i tried..
M:i think i am happy that we had this opportunity to talk a little about our country.Thank you
L:Thank you for you to accept i interview you.
M:You are welcome!
 





Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Top Three interview reviews


First
Carroll-Anderson Nicholas S.-19points ( http://en191f12s28nickca.blogspot.com/ )

His country report and the preparation covered the highest score. All main points were mentioned and explicitly. The transcript was not enough clear with the questions. With the audio link of the interview was awarded the extra point. The presentation of the blog was well done.

Second
Mohammed Toure L.-19points ( http://en191fl12s28mohamedto.blogspot.com/ )
All topics were covered and well done. On his interview and country report, he got a high score for including especially sub categories on the essay for more understanding where he did a good job. With the audio link, he will get the maximum.

Third
Brittany Hofstater M.-18points ( http://eng191f12s28brittanyhof.blogspot.com/ )
Her fisrt interview covered all the topics asked and there were really clear. I really liked her interview report with all the informations how the interviewee reacted. The country report could be more interresting with at least a picture where the country is located.

Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Scorecard

Here

First interview: CHINA

Interviewee: Bingzhe
Interviewer:Loris

Although it is my first time interviewing someone, i had to be prepared. For that, we planned to meet  in Miller center on Sunday at 2pm; i chose in library because i didn't want to be in place very calm which will make me uncomfortable. The first ten minutes, i just spoke with my interviewee to know a litlle bit each other before to begin the interview. As i and Bingzhe were talking, i began to get into the interview by questioning him without to be suddenly out of the subject. It was not really long, we spent on each question about 5minutes.

Throughout the interview, i was impressed of how chinese live especially the education which are given to them because it can be really related to the education we received in my country.Therefore, during the interview, we were using sometimes google translate which help us a lot by explaining some words it was not easy to understand. Moreover, my interviewee gave me some examples throughout the interview which was interresting as it was actually really helpful.In general, we discussed with couples questions about the history of China, culture, region and religion.

Bingzhe is an international student from China in the city called Nanjing. Even though chinese have some best college, Bingzhe chose to come in Saint Cloud State from the help of a compagny which expose different colleges for students who want to go to study abroad, and because it is cheap. However,it is more about how it is hard to do the competition because everyone do hardwork to enter in those Nanjing's college. As something most important for chinese, Bingzhe planned to go back to China one done with school.

Proud of his country, Bingzhe has a big respect of China after all the stories his country has been through. About 400years, China had several war which was countries who want their lands such as Russia, but usually they were hitted back. This experience gave to the chinese a lot strengh by controling all their lands across the country, and making strict rules for avoid the penetration of the enemies. Due to many provinces, China has his own language but the accent differe by province. Nevertheless, their traditional food is called "Dumpling" and "Noodles". Mostly, noodles are eaten in north of China while in south of China they eat more rice. Chinese have a traditional festival which is their New Year, and it depends on what they called "calculator lumar". Farmers used the calculator date to determine when it will be the moon so that they can reap, and then celebrate;it is usually at the end of January or the begining or February, and they can have two birthday in one year!how they are lucky! As festival, chinese have five such as spring festival, mid-autumn festival, tomb-sweeping day, the double ninth festival and dragon boat festival. For the wedding celebration, chinese does that in three process when the husband go to take her wife where she lives with presents, the wedding day when everyone can give them money to help for the preparation, friends and families will go to visite them at their new house. Confucianism related to a culture, but it is more a religion which consist on saying what chinese can do or not. They mostly believe in what he said because chinese think it is true. As two others religions, chinese have Buddhism from India and Taoism from China which had an important idea on keeping balance between Human and Nature. Regarding to their political system, China has only one party called Communist party; the party control the entire country. During the election, whoever the chinese chose, there are 10 people in government who are charged to nominate who will be the president everytime from the communist party. At the end, Bingzhe added he doesn't really care who will be president in time the country will continue to grow up.

Transcript of my interview:

Loris:Goodafternoon!!i am loris
Bingzhe:Goodafternoon!!Bingzhe...nice to meet you
L:Nice to meet you too!!Where are you from?Could you please tell me a little bit about you?
B:Yeah!my name is Bingzhe, i am from China and i am really proud of to be chinese.China has a long history.
L:Which city of China are you from?
B:I am from Nanjing,it is kinda close to Shanghai
L:So I know you have some good university in China!Why did you choose to study to Saint Cloud State?
B:As me, with my grade, i can't enter in Nanjing's university because Nanjing has good university and all chinese want to go there.It is a hard competition.
L:What are planning to do after school?
B:It is a hard question!
L:Somehow!but yeah (both laugh)
B:I want to go back to China because we have two different culture.The culture chock is really hard.My parents advised me to get some experiences from America, and then go back.But after graduation, i want to go back because it is difficult to get a job here.We are not American, we don't have green card. I have a friend who didn't get an internship because they told him our system only accept America people.
L:Unbelievable,but it happen.I had a cousin also who get a job after 2 years looking for a job.Back to china, what kind of activities young people do?
B:Karaoke is really famous in China now. It is from Japan, and also it became famous in Corea.When we are free,basketball,but we like to have also launch outside.
L:What is your traditional food?
B:Dumpling and Noodles. In north of china, they eat more noodles and in south rice.We can eat it anytime, it is only during festival.
L:What is the important day in your country which you celebrate?
B:Hmm..we have five:spring festival, mid-autumn festival, tomb-sweeping day, the double ninth festival and dragon boat festival.
L:How about marriage?how do you celebrate?
B:Marriage also is celebrated.The husband go to take her wife where she lives with presents, the wedding day when everyone can give them money to help for the preparation, friends and families will go to visite them at their new house.
L:What are your country's major religion?
B:Actually, there are Confucianism which is seen more like a religion than a culture,Buddhism which is from India and Taoism.
L:How is the political system of your country structured?
B:I think i will try to explain to you.We have only one party which is called communist party.During the election, there are 10 people who will choose the president from the communist party.This party control all the country,but the time my country is developping our economie;i do not care.I know we need to make some change and i hope the president will make it.
L:Is there anything you would like to add or to ask me before we end the interview?
B:Back to the marriage preparation,it is really expensive especially the drink which cost almost $300,but people buy it because they think it can give them a high status!
L:Really! it is expensive.So Thank you for your time.It was interresting.
B:You are welcome.It was a pleasure.

Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Camparison of my essay and Two others

here

Interviewing an International Student





      From different countries around the world, as an international student who interview another international student, it is challenging. Due to the different culture or lifestyle, the difficult thing during an interview will be to make an approach with the person.However, this experience can be beneficial in the way that the interviewer will be no longer nervous about doing any interview with a person from another country.

     Even if before the interview, the interviewer can challenge a hard time to find someone who will accept to be interviewed.Most of time, the first fifteen minutes are essential to help you either the interviewer or the interviewer to know each other.Culture has to be consider because it's differ from country.For example,when you talking to someone in U.S.,eye contact are really improtant while most in some Africa countries like Burundi where i am from;it can seem as a sign of disrespectful when you talk to someone older than you. Body-language can be facing when trying to approach each other. As the pression is not anymore there, the interviewer should begin by including his own question.Therefore, the accent of English has a big role during the interview which make uncomfortable each of them.

    Although the english can be a problem, that is the one of the hard challenge and the best benefit for the interview.In other words, it will improve the way of pronouncing the english for either the interviewer or the interviewee.As long as the interview will continue in good term, it shows how the interviewer get used to the interview.Usually,as an international student when interviewing another person;i feel after the first interview there is anything nervous the interviewer will be afraid about of.After the interview, the interviewer has more confidence to main another interview without fear.



     For an interview, it is really undeniable to know each other with the person you are interviewing, so that they can know the point of view of each one.This will be helpful to know what can be offensive for the interviewee, and doing a good interview.

My interview objectives and core questions




 As undeniable,the interview will help to know more about those Two countries which are China and Germany and moreover Burundi where i am from.However, i am little bit excited and nervous for this experience of interviewing people because it will be my first time.


My objectives of this interview:
  • To know better my interviewee
  • Avoid to stress the interviewee with many questions
  • Talk a little bit about me
  • Get more informations as possible about culture,religion and education
  • Make a camparison the difference between my country and those countries
Therefore,i needed to prepare some questions which can help me to get to my objectives:
  1. Could you tell me about yourself?(your name, home country)
  2. Why did you choose to study at St.cloud University?
  3. What are you planning to do after school?
  4. Can you tell me about activities that young people like to do in your country?
  5. Would you like to tell me about your country?
  6. What is your traditional food?
  7. Could you tell me about your country's traditional process ragarding marriage?
  8. What are your country's major religions?
  9. What’s considered offensive in your country?
  10. How is the political system of your country structured?
  11. Is there anything you would like to add before we end our interview?
  12. Do you have any questions for me, now that I have had the pleasure of asking you about so many things.

Sunday, October 14, 2012

Report Three countries




    My first country is Burundi.I wanted to do a presentation about my own country because i thought my classmate could be more informed by telling them a littlle bit about it.Most of the time, people say where they are from but we don't know even a little about that country.
   
    My second country i chose to talk about is Germany.Back in the time,during the colon's years, our country Burundi used to be colonized by German. That is why i want to include Germany in my presentation because it has a part of story in our Country.

    My third country will be China.This is the best opportunity for me to know more about China which a really big country with a long story.China helps us a lot in our country for many thing.It will give me more perspective of how i know China.

Website for Reference:

https://www.cia.gov/index.html

Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Library Work


 
 
 
First book: I got this book “Horse Thief” from my classmate Abdulmohsen Alkahtani (http://abdulmohsenken191f12s28.blogspot.com/ ) . The book is about a seventeen boy called Tullis Yoder who by losing two fingers in his first bull ride thought he will never have a chance to top another bull. His thirteen horses were about to be slaughtered for dog food; he steal his rodeo horses. “No malice. Only merriment as they nipped and nuzzled one another” (on page 15).
The author Peck, Robert Newton is an author of more than sixty books. Raised on a farm, he is familiar with cattle, hogs, and horses.
Second book: My classmate Bingxhe Xu (http://en191f12s28bingzhe.blogspot.com/ )  had that book “The Rise of Modern China” which is about how Chinese history have been a turbulent era in which domestic and foreign forces interacted to transform the Confucian universal empire into a modern national state. “While no consensus has been reached, there seems to be some tentative agreement among a majority of them on the question of periodization”(on page 15).
The author Immanuel C. Y. HSU is deeply grateful to many of his former professors at Harvard who taught him the historical discipline.
Third book: Ouedraogo Jonathan, T ( http://en191f12s28jonaou.blogspot.com/ ) gave me that book “How to talk Minnesotan” which actually is really interesting for people from other country; it gave us an overview of how people talk here with their culture. On page 15, they showed us how barbecue is prepared ”Many cooks substitute pickled herring for the hamburger and use cream of mushroom soup instead of Cheese Whiz as a topping”.
The author Howard Mohr had the idea to write this book for people who will visit this state, so that they don’t feel strange.
Fourth book: The book which Hassan Rabaan (http://en191f12s28rabaan.blogspot.com/ )  gave me is “Greek & Roman Mythology A to Z”. It is about The Mythology from that time when Greek & Roman existed by how the world was formed? Such as mountains, weather etc. On page 15, they talk about the name of the Argonauts:”Names of the Argonauts Many different names have been included in the muster roll of the Argo, the ship sailed by Jason in his quest for the Golden Fleece”.
The author Kathleen N. Daly is a writer and consulting editor who has written more than 100 books for young readers. She holds an M.A. from the University of Glasgow.
 Fifth book: “The development of Nigerian foreign Policy” is the book that Shonibare, Abigeal M ( http://shonibaremas19902802.blogspot.com/ ) gave me which is about how Nigerian does not have a foreign policy years’ back ago. “But it would be wrong to assume that Nigerian political parties, at the beginning of the election campaign, had definitely formulated policies for the nation to follow in world affairs” (on page 15).
the author Claude Phillips jr who died at the age of 94 in mount Dora and passed away in the month of nov, 9th at is home with his family at his side. He was a retired US navy captain who served in the World War II as a fighter pilot flying off of seven aircraft carriers in the Pacific Ocean.

Work cited:
  1. Peck, Robert Newton. “Horse Thief”. Harper Collins Publishers. 2002
  2. IMMAUEL C. Y. HUS “The Rise of MODERN CHINA”. The Oxford University Press Inc. New York 1970, page 718.
  3. Mohr, Howard. (August 4th, 1987). How To Talk Minnesotan: A visitor's Guide. New York, USA: Penguin Group.
  4. Kathleen N. Daly. “Greek & Roman Mythology A to Z”. 2004. United States of America
  5. Claude S. Phillips, Jr. “The development of Nigerian Foreign Policy”.1964. Northwestern University Press.  

We are in the Library-let's use it


1.       The book seems to me to be really interesting in terms that I want to know how and why U.S. brought their economic policy throughout Africa?

2.       Writing by Herbst, Jeffrey Ira; the book has one author.

3.       The title of the book I chose is “U.S. Economic Policy Toward Africa”

4.       The book was printed by COUNCIL ON FOREIGN RELATIONS PRESS and was published in the United States of America.

5.       the city where the book was printed is in New York 1992

Step2:

In the library, I just saw that book which took all my attention by title “U.S. Economic Policy Toward Africa”. American aid had been mostly the strategic action to rebuild the economy of Africa. However, the policies of U.S. Economy were not really approved. Those countries began to think about the industrialization, but they argued “scarce resources will tend to be misdirected into parallel and over lapping investments; and the possibilities of attracting private capital from abroad will be reduced”; They do not wanted American policy because it will not promote regional economic so that it can expand for large markets.

 

Herbst, Jeffrey Ira, COUNCIL ON FOREIGN RELATIONS PRESS, New York 1992

Tuesday, September 25, 2012


Thanksgiving day

EGLI 191 12/24/09
Story
Group: Enli Zhang, Sengwiza Loris
Today is Thanks Giving day, so Emily and her family members have dinner together. All of her family members want to hear the love story of Emily and her husband. Emily cannot refuse the requirement from her family members, so she begins to tell about her own love story. The story also happened on a Thanks Giving day many years ago, so there were so many discounts for everything. Emily had already waited for this day for a long time, so she decided to go to shop in the mall.
Emily was shopping in a Mall. Suddenly, a man was smoking and walking passed her with careless. A hole was burning in her pocket, so she was very angry and wanted him buy a new one for her. The man suddenly had some special feeling from this girl who stood in front of him, so he agreed with her and got shopping with her together. One hour later, Emily noticed a new skirt in the window of one shop. This skirt was new and its color was neon. The money was in her pocket but the man would pay the skirt for her. She wanted this skirt and the shop was open. As she wanted to take this skirt, a girl was also looking at the skirt and had interested on it. She took the skirt before Emily and walked to the cashier and waited in line. Unfortunately, the cashier closed the register as she hoped to pay. Generally, someone would give up and went away but she decided against it.It was a bummer time for her, so the girl had argument with cashiers. However, the girl did not receive the agreement from the cashiers. Finally, the quarrel was stopped by security guards. Therefore, Emilyalso left the boutique and tried not to think about the skirt any more. However, she could not stop thinking about this skirt in a restlessness situation. As she left the shop, the man promised that he must pay for the loss of her skirt and Emily could call him anytime. Therefore, they changed the number. On the second day, the man cloud not stop thinking about the girl who he met yesterday, so he called Emily and wanted to go to buy this skirt again. Emily was touched from the honest and sincerity of this man, so she returned the boutique with him again. She bought the skirt and the man paid for her. She felt so good. This was an elation day for her. She triedto take it home as soon as possible. As she arrived at home, she tried it on again. It fit none of her other clothes. Meanwhile, the man got successfully fell in love with her during this process.
After Emily finished telling her love story, she smiles and has a sweet eye connection with her husband. All of her family members were touched from their romantic and amazing love story. After dinner, they thank for god to give them this rare and precious opportunity to know each other and find their true love.

Tuesday, September 18, 2012

How my group organized the presentation on Online Resources?

       Loris Sengwiza                                                                                                     09/18/2012
       Engl 191
       Group speech


       My group was composed with two people Loris Sengwiza and Enli Zhang; we had  a good experience in doing together the paper.There is many things i liked during the preparation of the presentation.
     
        Without the exactly same topic, "Citations and Documentations" which was my topic and "Online Resources", we had to figure out how we will combine it for the presentation.Therefore, each one read the work done for everyone and we made some research about it. Explaining why we chose that topic and how is it necessary to use online resources for your paper, the topic will be presented in power point with four to six slide.

        First, we will begin by why we should use online resources and giving some main points;for example how it is useful for saving time. 
        Secondly, Enli Zhang will try to present a definition of resource which will give an explanation of what is resources.
         Thirdly, i will talk about different styles of citation which will be two styles such as APA and MLA. The preparation of the presentation put me in a situation where i personally did my best by working hard which is my main goal.

         

Tuesday, September 11, 2012

LEO Topic assignment: I would like to know how to write citations and documentations

Most of the time, it is really hard to know to make citations or documentations. What should i write for enough information? Where should i write it and how? However, i choose this topic because it is necessary to cite your sources; a paper has to show any details including specific number where i found it. Any wrong citations or documentations could be called "Plagiarism" which is something illegal; it is using someone's ideas. When writing a paper introducing and integrating source material in a paper, it has to be cite by two styles such as APA styles and MLA styles. Therefore, our own word are more interesting in a paper rather than copy and paste from someone else. In the time, you using citations or documentations;Be sure:

  • Which styles to use: APA styles with APA in text-citation or APA references pages, or MLA styles with MLA in text-citation or MLA works cited pages
  • Avoid "Plagiarism"
  • Using quotations, punctuating quotations  and paragraphing.
Furthermore, checking with some others websites can be helpful for improve your skills about citations or documentations.    

Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Student paper review

Loris Sengwiza
en191f12s28lorissen

      Student paper review

               My worst paper was not well organised: no introduction,body or conclusion.It has no paragraphe.
  
       xianpingen191f12s28.blogspot.com/Unforgettable visit;Sept.4.2012

             My best paper was really clear, the author knew how to catch the lecture by a well organisation and a good connection between paragraphe.

        en191f12s28jonaou.blogspot.com/Story in the box: Raul the drummer from Chile;Sept.4.2012

 

Trip

It was a Friday; we were in the basement with my friends, when each one of them showed us different things and sculptures they got during their childhood.

Bridget was a friend very active who really always had an ambition of travelling and explores the world. Kenya, in East Africa was her first destination where she found this amazing population with another lifestyle called "Massai". Bridget with her guider spent 2 days in that village, and before to leave the chef of the tribute gives her this beautiful status of a women massai; her name was Naomi and she was the first wife of the chef. Bridget became really obsessed about the status by keeping it in safe place because she always feels like anything can happen to her when she has it.

The blanket with 200 years has been used by almost 3 generations before him. In 18s years, Lucile who was the mother of Nathan’s great mother gives the blanket to her daughter which that time save her during the worst winter. Nathan‘s great mother stayed with this blanket in memories of her mother Lucile who died during that winter, and when his mother turn came to give to Nathan; she cried. Telling how her mother got this blanket black made in some kind animal’s wool, Nathan noticed how the blanket was in some way the origin of why he exist.

Visiting China and Peru, my cousin Lucas brought specials gifts for me. I liked more the stamp from china which is made in material called marble. Lucas got it from a homeless who was always in the way Lucas used. He gave him each day a coin, but he decided to bring him in a center one day. After 1month, the homeless got his first job; he was really amazed by the action of Lucas why this gift, and he bought three chestnuts really sweet. His trip in Peru was the wonderful one. He brought a carving of a man when he passed by a village where people have a ritual of running and hitting a drum.

Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Inventory


1.Piece of blanket 200 years old
2.Chile Statue drummer
3.3 chest nuts
4.Bowl from New Mexico
5.Chinese stamp
6.Jar
7.Mexican Village
8.Singapor coin collector
9.Wooden ruler 30cm long
10.Wooden hoad
11.American Indian canoe
12.Wallet
13.Bold Women statue Masai

Who am i and What do i stand for?

My name is Loris Sengwiza, i am from Burundi called "The heart of Africa". During my childhood, i had the best unforgetable moments with laugh, kind and honest people among my friends or my family. So that is how i became the person i am.However, my parents always give me a lot of advices which helped me to find my way on what should i stand for.By being correct,honest or think before to make an action, like to work is the motto of what i stand for.