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Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Student paper review

Loris Sengwiza
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      Student paper review

               My worst paper was not well organised: no introduction,body or conclusion.It has no paragraphe.
  
       xianpingen191f12s28.blogspot.com/Unforgettable visit;Sept.4.2012

             My best paper was really clear, the author knew how to catch the lecture by a well organisation and a good connection between paragraphe.

        en191f12s28jonaou.blogspot.com/Story in the box: Raul the drummer from Chile;Sept.4.2012

 

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