Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Thanksgiving day
EGLI 191 12/24/09
Story
Group: Enli Zhang, Sengwiza Loris
Today is Thanks Giving day, so Emily and her family members have dinner together. All of her family members want to hear the love story of Emily and her husband. Emily cannot refuse the requirement from her family members, so she begins to tell about her own love story. The story also happened on a Thanks Giving day many years ago, so there were so many discounts for everything. Emily had already waited for this day for a long time, so she decided to go to shop in the mall.
Emily was shopping in a Mall. Suddenly, a man was smoking and walking passed her with careless. A hole was burning in her pocket, so she was very angry and wanted him buy a new one for her. The man suddenly had some special feeling from this girl who stood in front of him, so he agreed with her and got shopping with her together. One hour later, Emily noticed a new skirt in the window of one shop. This skirt was new and its color was neon. The money was in her pocket but the man would pay the skirt for her. She wanted this skirt and the shop was open. As she wanted to take this skirt, a girl was also looking at the skirt and had interested on it. She took the skirt before Emily and walked to the cashier and waited in line. Unfortunately, the cashier closed the register as she hoped to pay. Generally, someone would give up and went away but she decided against it.It was a bummer time for her, so the girl had argument with cashiers. However, the girl did not receive the agreement from the cashiers. Finally, the quarrel was stopped by security guards. Therefore, Emilyalso left the boutique and tried not to think about the skirt any more. However, she could not stop thinking about this skirt in a restlessness situation. As she left the shop, the man promised that he must pay for the loss of her skirt and Emily could call him anytime. Therefore, they changed the number. On the second day, the man cloud not stop thinking about the girl who he met yesterday, so he called Emily and wanted to go to buy this skirt again. Emily was touched from the honest and sincerity of this man, so she returned the boutique with him again. She bought the skirt and the man paid for her. She felt so good. This was an elation day for her. She triedto take it home as soon as possible. As she arrived at home, she tried it on again. It fit none of her other clothes. Meanwhile, the man got successfully fell in love with her during this process.
After Emily finished telling her love story, she smiles and has a sweet eye connection with her husband. All of her family members were touched from their romantic and amazing love story. After dinner, they thank for god to give them this rare and precious opportunity to know each other and find their true love.
Tuesday, September 18, 2012
How my group organized the presentation on Online Resources?
Loris Sengwiza 09/18/2012
Engl 191
Group speech
My group was composed with two people Loris Sengwiza and Enli Zhang; we had a good experience in doing together the paper.There is many things i liked during the preparation of the presentation.
Without the exactly same topic, "Citations and Documentations" which was my topic and "Online Resources", we had to figure out how we will combine it for the presentation.Therefore, each one read the work done for everyone and we made some research about it. Explaining why we chose that topic and how is it necessary to use online resources for your paper, the topic will be presented in power point with four to six slide.
First, we will begin by why we should use online resources and giving some main points;for example how it is useful for saving time.
Secondly, Enli Zhang will try to present a definition of resource which will give an explanation of what is resources.
Thirdly, i will talk about different styles of citation which will be two styles such as APA and MLA. The preparation of the presentation put me in a situation where i personally did my best by working hard which is my main goal.
Engl 191
Group speech
My group was composed with two people Loris Sengwiza and Enli Zhang; we had a good experience in doing together the paper.There is many things i liked during the preparation of the presentation.
Without the exactly same topic, "Citations and Documentations" which was my topic and "Online Resources", we had to figure out how we will combine it for the presentation.Therefore, each one read the work done for everyone and we made some research about it. Explaining why we chose that topic and how is it necessary to use online resources for your paper, the topic will be presented in power point with four to six slide.
First, we will begin by why we should use online resources and giving some main points;for example how it is useful for saving time.
Secondly, Enli Zhang will try to present a definition of resource which will give an explanation of what is resources.
Thirdly, i will talk about different styles of citation which will be two styles such as APA and MLA. The preparation of the presentation put me in a situation where i personally did my best by working hard which is my main goal.
Tuesday, September 11, 2012
LEO Topic assignment: I would like to know how to write citations and documentations
Most of the time, it is really hard to know to make citations or documentations. What should i write for enough information? Where should i write it and how? However, i choose this topic because it is necessary to cite your sources; a paper has to show any details including specific number where i found it. Any wrong citations or documentations could be called "Plagiarism" which is something illegal; it is using someone's ideas. When writing a paper introducing and integrating source material in a paper, it has to be cite by two styles such as APA styles and MLA styles. Therefore, our own word are more interesting in a paper rather than copy and paste from someone else. In the time, you using citations or documentations;Be sure:
- Which styles to use: APA styles with APA in text-citation or APA references pages, or MLA styles with MLA in text-citation or MLA works cited pages
- Avoid "Plagiarism"
- Using quotations, punctuating quotations and paragraphing.
Tuesday, September 4, 2012
Student paper review
Loris Sengwiza
en191f12s28lorissen
Student paper review
My worst paper was not well organised: no introduction,body or conclusion.It has no paragraphe.
xianpingen191f12s28.blogspot.com/Unforgettable visit;Sept.4.2012
My best paper was really clear, the author knew how to catch the lecture by a well organisation and a good connection between paragraphe.
en191f12s28jonaou.blogspot.com/Story in the box: Raul the drummer from Chile;Sept.4.2012
en191f12s28lorissen
Student paper review
My worst paper was not well organised: no introduction,body or conclusion.It has no paragraphe.
xianpingen191f12s28.blogspot.com/Unforgettable visit;Sept.4.2012
My best paper was really clear, the author knew how to catch the lecture by a well organisation and a good connection between paragraphe.
en191f12s28jonaou.blogspot.com/Story in the box: Raul the drummer from Chile;Sept.4.2012
Trip
It was a Friday; we were in the basement with my friends, when each one of them showed us different things and sculptures they got during their childhood.
Bridget was a friend very active who really always had an ambition of travelling and explores the world. Kenya, in East Africa was her first destination where she found this amazing population with another lifestyle called "Massai". Bridget with her guider spent 2 days in that village, and before to leave the chef of the tribute gives her this beautiful status of a women massai; her name was Naomi and she was the first wife of the chef. Bridget became really obsessed about the status by keeping it in safe place because she always feels like anything can happen to her when she has it.
The blanket with 200 years has been used by almost 3 generations before him. In 18s years, Lucile who was the mother of Nathan’s great mother gives the blanket to her daughter which that time save her during the worst winter. Nathan‘s great mother stayed with this blanket in memories of her mother Lucile who died during that winter, and when his mother turn came to give to Nathan; she cried. Telling how her mother got this blanket black made in some kind animal’s wool, Nathan noticed how the blanket was in some way the origin of why he exist.
Visiting China and Peru, my cousin Lucas brought specials gifts for me. I liked more the stamp from china which is made in material called marble. Lucas got it from a homeless who was always in the way Lucas used. He gave him each day a coin, but he decided to bring him in a center one day. After 1month, the homeless got his first job; he was really amazed by the action of Lucas why this gift, and he bought three chestnuts really sweet. His trip in Peru was the wonderful one. He brought a carving of a man when he passed by a village where people have a ritual of running and hitting a drum.
Bridget was a friend very active who really always had an ambition of travelling and explores the world. Kenya, in East Africa was her first destination where she found this amazing population with another lifestyle called "Massai". Bridget with her guider spent 2 days in that village, and before to leave the chef of the tribute gives her this beautiful status of a women massai; her name was Naomi and she was the first wife of the chef. Bridget became really obsessed about the status by keeping it in safe place because she always feels like anything can happen to her when she has it.
The blanket with 200 years has been used by almost 3 generations before him. In 18s years, Lucile who was the mother of Nathan’s great mother gives the blanket to her daughter which that time save her during the worst winter. Nathan‘s great mother stayed with this blanket in memories of her mother Lucile who died during that winter, and when his mother turn came to give to Nathan; she cried. Telling how her mother got this blanket black made in some kind animal’s wool, Nathan noticed how the blanket was in some way the origin of why he exist.
Visiting China and Peru, my cousin Lucas brought specials gifts for me. I liked more the stamp from china which is made in material called marble. Lucas got it from a homeless who was always in the way Lucas used. He gave him each day a coin, but he decided to bring him in a center one day. After 1month, the homeless got his first job; he was really amazed by the action of Lucas why this gift, and he bought three chestnuts really sweet. His trip in Peru was the wonderful one. He brought a carving of a man when he passed by a village where people have a ritual of running and hitting a drum.
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